Friday, September 10, 2010

Is scared
Is afraid
Is feeling unsafe
Is terrified
Is surprised

All because my teacher said she was going to kill my friend Jordan.

1 comment:

  1. So what kind of story could you turn this into? I would be interested in reading a story that starts this way. Who is telling the story? What are they like? How old? Who is Jordan? Why does the teacher want to kill him? Did the teacher say this in front of anyone else? Get to writing boy, you have a great beginning.

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